Tuesday, May 7, 2013

The Hunter

"The Hunter" is a companion story to "The Jesus, Jesus Picture".  It tells the story of my grandfather's desperate quest for love after my grandmother died.   "The Hunter" was the second prize winner in INSIGHT'S 1991 writing contest.  Some of the incidents in this story also appear in the narrative of CHURCH SCHOOL BLUES.


Grandma wasn’t dead and buried six weeks when Grandpa started looking for a new wife.
“It’s too soon,” said Tory’s mother. ‘‘I don’t know what’s wrong with my dad.”

Grandma’s death had been unexpected. She had been in good health, still teaching school at the age of 69, when without warning she died in the middle of the night with a mild case of the flu.  Mama and Tory’s aunts agreed that it looked like Grandpa hadn’t loved Grandma very much, starting up so soon with ideas of marrying again.  Tory didn’t know what to think. She was 12 when Grandma died. She was still 12 when Grandpa started his campaigns to find a new wife.

Grandpa, always logical, was methodical in his search. He called to mind a number of women he had known in years past, or whom he had met and knew to be without a husband. Then he wrote to two or three women at a time.  The whole thing just didn’t seem respectful to Grandma’s memory, nor to the women he canvassed like a salesman.  The aunts said he was getting senile, and it was true that, of late, there was a tremor in his handshake and a shuffling to his once-confident stride.

But Tory’s mother remembered, “He always approached romance in a strange way. When he proposed to Mother, he had proposed to another woman, also. We were lucky Mother could make a decision very quickly — she said yes first.”  Tory listened to the conversation between her mother and her mother’s sisters and thought, If Grandma hadn’t been so quick to make up her mind, none of us would have been born. It made her queasy to think by how narrow a chance the whole lot of them had managed to exist.

Grandma had been a 32-year-old schoolteacher when she married Grandpa. It had all happened in the northern woods of Minnesota, where the trees were still thick in Tory’s time (she had seen them once, on a trip when she was 10). Houses and people, and perhaps eligible women, were few and far apart.  Later Grandpa and Grandma moved their fledgling family south to a land that was just as thick with trees, and almost as lonely. There they built a school and taught the gospel.

Tory remembered Grandpa when he wasn’t as old as he was now, still strong and independent. She remembered when he ruled his classes of seventh and eighth graders. He was stern and exacting, yet able to tell a good story. Even now, with his steps turning to shuffles and holding a cane he didn’t know quite what to do with, he had a way of catching a person off guard with that keen look Tory remembered from better years.  He just doesn't think like we do, she thought.  He’s the last pioneer, thrust into a world of television and freeways and keeping up appearances.

In her fifteenth year Tory saw the last passenger trains come to Chattanooga. The newspeople said that tractor-trailer rigs were running trains out of the business of hauling freight, and that the family car and the airplane had replaced the passenger train.  But when Grandpa traveled across the United States to visit a lady on the West Coast, he went by train. He returned by way of Chattanooga, where Tory and her parents now lived.  Tory and her mother went to the depot to meet him. The old train station’s grand lines were obscured by dust and litter. Derelicts slept in the shade of the platform. Like the broken men that took refuge under the roof, the depot was a derelict, a thing of the past.  When the train came in, Grandpa was the only passenger to disembark. He paused on the step, one hand on the rail, sun on his white hair.

“Daddy!” called Tory’s mother. ‘‘We’re over here.” She started forward to take his suitcase, but Tory hesitated, struck by a sense of history. That proud old man with the handsome, haggard face, standing so erect on the stoop of that train, and the train itself, were of an age . The passenger train had just about had its time. And Grandpa, with that gleam in his eye from having just blazed a trail across the country, had about had his time. Already his ways of thinking, his ways of finding a wife, were obsolete.  Don’t go, thought Tory to the train and to her grandfather. Don’t go.

‘‘Tory!” called her mother. ‘‘Don’t just stand there. Come take his other suitcase.”  Tory obeyed, while Mama took Grandpa’s arm and helped him off the train. Tory followed them, feeling bewildered. She recognized that he must feel the same bewilderment. How can things change before you know it? How can this be the last train?

The West Coast courtship had not been successful. The lady had been kind, but the outcome was clear. Grandpa had returned alone, and there were no plans for future visits.  But Grandpa was undaunted. ‘‘While I was there, I succeeded in obtaining the address of Nora Brady. You remember Nora, don’t you, Lisa’?”

Tory’s mother nodded . ‘‘ I remember Mrs. Brady. She taught school with you and Mother for several years.”

‘‘Well, you’d never guess where she is now. She’s gone back to the northern woods, and is still teaching school !”

‘‘ She must be almost 70.”

‘‘Seventy-one,’‘ said Grandpa. ‘‘She never remarried after Mr. Brady died. She was a good Christian woman. A good woman.”  Grandpa had already sent a letter to her, mailed from the West Coast.

Tory’s mother suddenly looked exhausted. She had expected him to arrive discouraged, perhaps a little wiser, ready to calm down and accept the fact that he was old. His health was failing, and on top of that, he was a pauper. What other woman would be willing to live like Grandma had lived? Grandma, sharing his zeal to spread the gospel, to teach, to serve, had spent as little time keeping the home as he had. All they had was a tiny, dilapidated travel trailer and an unfinished two-room cabin in the woods.

“Mrs. Brady probably won’t answer the letter,” said Mother quietly to Tory. “He’s watching the mail, and he’s going to be disappointed again.”

But the 71-year-old schoolteacher in the northern woods did answer Grandpa’s letter. The letters of Nora Brady followed Grandpa from house to house as he became more dependent upon his children and they shared the task of caring for him. He became confined to a wheelchair, and still Nora Brady wrote.

“She can’t have any idea how feeble he is,” said Mother. “She thinks he’s still the way he was 25 years ago.”

Grandpa’s handwriting grew shaky, and then he could hardly write at all. His mind sometimes wandered to places in the past, and to other places no one could recognize. But the part of him that was Grandpa watched for the mail, and Nora Brady kept writing.  Soon his replies were returned to Mrs. Brady in Tory’s best script. She knelt by his wheelchair, scrupulously taking down every word, each unique turn of phrase, so that the letters she wrote were entirely his own.  Grandpa’s letters were scholarly. The historian came out in him as he described the founding of schools and the progress of townships. He chronicled his own life. At the end of his letters, as at the end of Mrs. Brady’s, was always the same text: Romans 8:28.

As Tory sat on the floor by Grandpa’s chair, she looked into the past with him. Grandpa was a time machine, his words transporting her backward. Her eyes became dazzled by the northern lights, she thrilled to wolf calls as sharp and clear as the winter snow that buried the northern woods. She trekked with him on snowshoes across the frozen land, where not a light could be seen beneath the stars.  Every day she was with him she urged him to tell her more. He might soon disappear with the passenger trains, but she, Tory, would save everything.  She felt herself aging—aging backward. Sixteen now, she felt her memories stretch further back than she was old. She breathed in the chill air of lost Minnesota nights, and shivered in the Southern heat of her own time. 

“Grandpa,” said Tory as they finished a chronicle to Nora Brady, “your letter is missing something. A woman you are courting wants to hear, well, something about how you feel for her.” So “with love” was added to Grandpa’s letters.

As soon as school was out, Nora Brady wrote that she was coming south to see him. Grandpa was delighted. For a few days he seemed to regain some of his vigor. But time was running out, and Grandpa’s will and Tory’s will put together couldn’t stop its progression.  As school drew to a close in the north, Grandpa declined. He was staying with Aunt Cecily now, more at ease in her Smoky Mountain home than in Chattanooga’s smog and traffic. Too weak to get out of bed, he held tight to his notion that Nora Brady would come. Mrs. Brady would come, they would get married, and live in his cabin in the woods.

Nora Brady did come. The family told her how badly Grandpa’s condition had turned, and she still came.
The first time Tory saw Nora Brady, she was applying medication to Grandpa’s bedsores. Though his emaciated body was beyond repair, the woman from the north sat calmly on the bed beside him, ministering to him with tender, gnarled hands.  This was something no one had expected. Even Tory, who understood Grandpa’s need to keep loving, had not dreamed it would be returned in this measure.

And Grandpa, always the hunter, the logical seeker, now had to stay in one place while something illogical like love came to him.  Nora Brady became his nurse, his companion, his comforter, his sweetheart. Behind her serene gaze, Tory sensed a story, one that had never been told, that perhaps never would be told. Had Nora Brady, all those years ago, loved him in the privacy of her heart? She did not say. She did not speak of her feelings. Her ministering hands, her constancy, spoke them for her.  Tory remembered Romans 8:28:  “And we know that all things work together for good to them that love God.”

A few months later, Grandpa died—peacefully, gently, in the arms of Nora Brady.

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